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When I was twelve and at the park,
I met the strangest thing.
It sat behind a big oak tree,
And smelt of garbage bins.

I peeked at it behind the oak.
It saw me straight away.
It smirked and spoke (or did he growl?),
“So how are you today?”

I’d never seen a thing like this;
Its form was not quite right.
To see it made me shudder,
Though I stared more than polite.

His eyes had pierced right through me,
Two red and scalding coals
He pulled his coat around him,
As he sat amongst the shoals.

“You can call me Mr. Vine,”
He continued on to say.
“I know your name already.”
He sniffed, then turned away.

“Do you want to know a secret?”
He stared out to the lake.
“It really is a good one,
No better one to take.”

“You see, I have been sitting here
For such a child as you,
To tell this perfect secret…
I think that you will do.”

“Come closer, dear,” he looked at me,,
Once more with gleaming eyes.
“I’m afraid I’ll have to whisper it,
To shy from prying minds.”

I took a few steps closer…
The last thing I recall,
His feet, all clawed and scaly,
As I hit the mossy floor.

Five years go by and here am I
Not quite sure what has changed
Since the day I met a demon
That took my soul away.
©2009 ~sadwar
:iconsadwar:

Author's Comments

Soz for the length guys... it just kinda monster-ed out... and apologies for any spelling/grammatical errors, I wrote this preeeeetty late at night. Mwahaha the darkness is my frieeend...

It's a shame this poem is kinda angsty, I'm in such a happy mood right now. :D Isn't that right, Mr Vine?

LOL I totally gotta draw a picture of him now.
I found him after lookin through Wiki for a good character.

Vine (demon)
In demonology, Vine is an Earl of Hell, commanding 36 legions of demons. He can tell present, past and future, discover witches and hidden things, create storms and make the water rough and bring down walls.

*reads over poem again* hehehehe I am such a dumbass! As IF that doesn't shout DODGY PERSON.. Let's just say I was mesmerised by the weirdness

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:iconguardianleyevermore:
I thought you said this was in Melbourn 0.o

I was a bit freaked for a while ^^;


Yeah... that Mr vine dude is pretty neat.

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A vanishing speck in those inane dominions,
Single and frail, uncertain of her place.
Alone in the bright host of her companions,
Lost in the blue unfriendliness of space.


A.D. Hope
:iconshadowrose-burdened:
o_0. You didn't realise he was bad news until after he took your soul? Hmm, makes sense. U didn't realise I stole 5 bucks outta ur pocket last year.

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1 vita forte: 1 strong life

:blackrose:
:iconsadwar:
LOL, nahh, I still haven't found/looked for that one.

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It could be a lot worse, you know... I could be Bella.
:iconsadwar:
:jawdrop:

You stole five bucks?! Are you implying that it was dumb of me to hang around you?
Coz I'd just call myself oblivious if you've done that, but if that's what you think..

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It could be a lot worse, you know... I could be Bella.
:iconshadowrose-burdened:
No, not dumb, oblivious. But I bought something for you with it.

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1 vita forte: 1 strong life

:blackrose:
:iconsadwar:
You did? YAY! :clap: What was it what was it? :bounce:

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It could be a lot worse, you know... I could be Bella.
:iconguardianleyevermore:
Whaaaaaat?

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A vanishing speck in those inane dominions,
Single and frail, uncertain of her place.
Alone in the bright host of her companions,
Lost in the blue unfriendliness of space.


A.D. Hope
:iconsadwar:
I. HAVE NOT. FOUND. THAT. POEM. YET.

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It could be a lot worse, you know... I could be Bella.
:iconshadowrose-burdened:
2 choccies and a garlic bread

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1 vita forte: 1 strong life

:blackrose:

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